"Just put the words in a different order"

Some of you may be feeling like the writer in this cartoon, hearing that the words she wrote were fine but the editor would like them all in a completely different order. I have returned all the bios that you wrote, some of them with my notes asking that the words be put in a different order.

If you don't agree, let me know or let's throw it open to the class.

My intention is to edit your writing as if I were getting it ready for publication. My editing mind is back in my Seattle Times newsroom chair thinking, "How can I make this the most engaging story possible for our readers?"

Which should not be interpreted as my trying to hammer all of your writing into a daily journalism mold. I'd like to think I can expand my horizons enough to encompass other writing forms -- and that's what I will be doing with your longer pieces.

I also try to give you as much feedback as possible. If I just handed back your papers with a note that all was "fine," I don't think I'd be earning my pay or that you would be getting your money's worth.

I don't want anyone asking for a refund at the end of the quarter. See you Tuesday night.